| Unspoken Fear is part relationship novel, part thriller, part police procedural. Unfortunately, the sum of these parts don't add up to a great whole, and the book would have been much better if it had stuck with one part only, preferably the domestic drama. There is more than enough angst and mystery there to keep it going for several hundred pages. The hurdles the main couple overcome in their personal
development are, in any case, far more convincing than the dubious
and hyperbolic serial killer story that supposedly impedes their
personal happiness.
Noah Gibson has just got out of prison for killing two people while
driving drunk. Once a minister in a small town in Delaware, he lost
his faith and turned to alcohol after a series of personal tragedies.
Reformed and dry once again, he is planning to take over the
management of his parents' vineyard from his ex-wife, Rachel. In the
meantime, the two share a house, along with her four-year-old
daughter Mallory and Mattie, an idiot savant who collects Bibles he
cannot read and plays the church organ without any formal training.
While Rachel and Noah try to get their lives in order and decide
whether they have a future together, someone else in the small
Delaware town is on a divine mission against sinners. Adulterers,
thieves and homosexuals are slaughtered in the most graphic, Old
Testament manner. Not surprisingly, suspicion points to Noah. The
town sheriff and his deputy try to make the case stick, but they are
also open-minded enough to explore other angles.
Morgan exploits the claustrophobia of small town life to create an
eerie atmosphere. She nevertheless goes over the top by giving Rachel
strange, prophetic dreams and Noah unexplicable blackouts. Officer
Snowden and Deputy Swift, who are also battling their attraction to
each other, are likeable characters, but their police work just isn't
up to par. They hope to identify the murderer by going through the
purchase list of a local hardware store. As if one couldn't buy a
machete elsewhere!
I couldn't take any of red herrings seriously, and the solution to
the mystery is a major disappointment. Although several scenes are
given in the villain's point of view, the character is never really
introduced and nothing points to his/her guilt until the end. The
climax is drawn out over several chapters only to be resolved in the
most unsatisfactory fashion: it is never really clear whether the
evil is human or something else. Worse, the vague and inconclusive
allusions to supernatural intervention do little to heighten the
suspense and everything to make the writer's ploys excessive,
transparent and annoying.
Morgan makes every attempt to play with our heartstrings: through an
ex-minister on the path to redemption, a sheriff whose white mother
never revealed the name of his African-American father, a mentally
handicapped man who is more emotionally disturbed than might be
warranted, and a four-year-old with a very bad lisp. The first three
work to some extent, but the last is contrived, hollow and
inauthentic. Much is made of Mallory's speech impediment, but
although Noah helps her get rid of part of it, the rest comes and
goes with as much sense as a summer shower. Which reminds me, how
many four-year-olds do you know who count Harry Potter as bedtime
reading?
With this one exception, the characters have much more depth than the
manipulative plot deserves. It's too bad really because Morgan writes
nicely, and her insights into Noah's and Rachel's relationship
suggest she knows enough of the human heart not to have to resort to
cheap tricks. Hopefully, her next venture will be more solid.
--Mary Benn
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